So I've started editing last November's national write a novel month. I'm hoping to release edited chapters every few weeks. This one was a bit rushed, due to the fact that I decided to do it a few hours ago. I may go back later this week and do more edits. But here are changes from the first cut:
- More backstory on the two characters. Don't know why.
- Less detailed
- More backstory on the two characters. Don't know why.
- Less detailed
